Sunday, April 12, 2015

The Geat King's Return

I wrote this poem after reading Beowulf and tried to structure the poem in a subjective way; I do not portray Beowulf as innately good, nor Grendel as innately bad. I remember this one being particularly hard to write, but similar to Scar's Soliloquy, it was a fun challenge to scribe this one.


I, the great Scop, have yet another adage to share
Come gather around to hear the truth, if you dare
For the unfinished tale and later analysis
Of the heroic Beowulf, and his noble “antics”

Who tore off the limb of the devilish Grendel
And who restored to glory Hrothgar’s beer-temple
Though armed with blade and shield alike,
His bravery and brains were his true might

He deflected the blasphemy-bullets from the “mighty” Unferth
It was not in his noble deeds where he found his worth
Instead he measured his success by the weight of his gold
Who, till the end, never lost his soul

Ah, but now the gears in your brain churning
Your flesh-mirrors are showing signs of worrying
This same one who killed trolls, dragons, and serpents from the sea,
Was this same protagonist, the greatest of the Geats?

He was the one that millions call hero?
This haughty, boastful, tyrannical-like Emperor Nero?
The same superfluous superman swooped down to save the day
Always had another question in mind: “How much will I be paid?”

Yes my kinsmen, tis the same man
The one born of Hygelac’s clan
The struggle of yours is also mine,
Was this man truly divine?

Or was he, only the right person at the right time?
A remorseful soul, seeking redemption for past crimes?
A brainless beast who needed to be pushed in the right direction?
Ultimately, are his attributes worthy of resurrection?

For in a world that pushes for the incognizant and personal
And is always surly and unmerciful,
Beowulf showed sacrifice and courage
His life was one filled with meaning and purpose

Although the adulation he acquired astounded and humbled him
He forever praised God, the deity who helped him win
So yes I too struggle with this character of Beowulf
For now, more than ever, it seems as though we need him

The world needs those who are willing to stand up for they believe in
Those who are proud of their accomplishments
Those who are willing to sacrifice and pay the price
Those who will give it all to do what is right

Yes, I join with the mourners at Beowulf’s funeral
And ask the heavens if they would be so kind,
To return the great king and send him down again
So that the broken values can be restored
And this spit-valve of mine may finally stop,
Boasting of the stories of old
And instead tell stories of the bold

That with thunderous trepidation the king can return
For we of the 21st century have much to learn

But I also acknowledge that in the darker parts of the Earth
Another sinister chant may have been birthed
This one sung by the descendants of Cain
As they mourn Grendel and his mother, Beowulf’s bane

They profoundly preach and praise them both
Their lives of sacrifice are inspiring; all should take note
For they stood up to the horror-chants of man
They destroyed a mead-hall, and took their own stance

So in the end, there may be no heroes and villains
Simply those who act according to their will
For whether one’s life ends by a fire-giver’s talon
Or through painful decomposition

Beowulf taught to overcome temptation, sacrifice, and restore
And ultimately, to devote your life to something worth fighting for
But as Beowulf learned from his friends and foes,
Let us look to Gardener’s Grendel and see how the story unfolds!

2 comments:

  1. Nice but do you mean "gReat" and not "geat"?

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  2. I love the combination of the colloquial language with the formality of the phrasing and the structure that also characterizes the story of Beowulf, such as when you wrote "And who restored to glory Hrothgar’s beer-temple". The ideas in your analysis are powerful by themselves as well. Great work, Zach!

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